Stella shows and states that she is thrilled by Stanely's violence '' i was - sort of - thrilled by it '' the pauses between her speech indicates that she is searching for a term to express her emotions and has concluded to one that shocks Blanche.
'' On our wedding night - soon as we came in here - he snatched off one of my slippers and rushed about the place smashing the light-bulbs with it '' this statement made my Stella shows that his violence is also a memory as well as present and the memory is a wonderful one because it was on her wedding night.
Very hard to be really positive about this as there is so little to mark here.
ReplyDeleteYou have begun to write something, but to be honest I expect and get a lot more from my year 7 students.