[Stella has gotten breakfast ready and is waiting for Stanley. Stanley walks in and sits]
Stanley: good morning baby
Stella: good morning [pauses] i hope Blanche is ok, she's not so used to this
Stanley: this? if she wants to stay under my roof she'll have to get used to whatever she's given, Stella
Stella: ok lets not start again. how'd you like your breakfast
Stanley: i like it very much [gets up and kisses her on the cheek, leaving all his used cutlery on the table] i better get moving to work
[Stella stays seated staring into open air, she thinks about her sister and frowns. Stella then washes up the dishes and goes into her room to lay]
Very imaginative use of vocabulary which makes the reader think :)
ReplyDeleteebi: very interesting so it should be longer :(