Dear Diary,
I have longed for love and romance ever since... well ever since i was alone and lonely. Could Mitch be the one? Must he be the one? He must be the one. I've missed the way Allan used to touch and hold me, i miss how he'd kiss my tender lips. i miss Allan. Could Mitch replace him?
I just dont want to be alone, this could be a sign from God, maybe this is my final chance with true love. I wish i could fall in love with Mitch, i want to be with him but i can't seem to get myself to fall for him. He leans to kiss me but i reject but i want him there... it doesn't make sense.
i pray to god i choose the right decision and follow my heart to my desires.
You have attempted to write something consistent with character and circumstance from the play however there are a number of things which don't ring true.
ReplyDeleteHow does Blanche feel regarding Allan - from what we know about his death and the reasons for it?
Why is Blanche so keen to get married again?
There isn't much of a sense of her motivation, fear or even an accurate history. There are some references to how she is with Mitch and this is good but not a great deal of depth or evidence of your knowledge of the play and characters.